I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
It is great to see you are becoming a blogging superstar! You did an awesome job adding a title and a caption. I agree that Fritz is very kind. Don't forget to always add a full stop at the end of your sentences.
Well done you have posted to your blog and the picture is the perfect size. I'm interested to know why you think Fritz is kind? What has he done to show kindness?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Patolo,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you are becoming a blogging superstar! You did an awesome job adding a title and a caption. I agree that Fritz is very kind. Don't forget to always add a full stop at the end of your sentences.
Tena koe Patolo,
ReplyDeleteWell done you have posted to your blog and the picture is the perfect size. I'm interested to know why you think Fritz is kind?
What has he done to show kindness?
good job for completing the blog
ReplyDeleteI AM JONATHAN I raelly like your background
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava patolo you set out a good example of how Fritz is a good friend
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