I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Patolo, This is Tafa here I would like to say your work is so interesting. I like how you got a great texture, I think next time you should work on adding more information of why you chose this coloring to color. I hope you have a great rest of the holidays From: Tafa
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Hello patolo you have done a great job on your work today
ReplyDeleteIt is very intreasting
well done
From aisha
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ReplyDeleteHi Patolo,
ReplyDeleteThis is Tafa here I would like to say your work is so interesting. I like how you got a great texture, I think next time you should work on adding more information of why you chose this coloring to color.
I hope you have a great rest of the holidays
From: Tafa